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Surprising

Great imagery, great music build up, and, overall, a pretty good flow. I would like to see some more fluid animation in your future pieces, but the style fits this piece quite well. Keep up the good work. Whether or not I agree with your views, I'm voting this animation high. It's ballsy to post something relatively religious these days. The fact that it has some people below really talking about the message (whether or not they agree with it) means that it's an effective piece of art, in my opinion. My only critique would be that sometimes the voice sounded a little less clear. May just be my speakers.

I've been waiting!

The animation style is much better, I still dig the voices, and the story still gets me pumped. I could hug you right now for making this. I thought you were going to end it on the sad note from the last episode (almost gave up hope!), but you really came through man! Can't wait for the conclusion.

Catchy and odd

I'm a big fan of the art used in this flash. It's definitely a weird beat that you made - I'll keep listening to it over and over, but uh...not in public.

HOWEVER, I didn't notice any major changes by the 4th time through. You promised! Out of curiosity though, whose head is Link pushing down when Tingle appears?

Touching

The story arch, although simple, really seemed to be touching, and had a pretty interesting lesson at the end.
It was pretty smart how you were able to link the music in with the motion of each level. I think that this really came together in lvl 3, as you had a lot of objects and characters moving at the same time.

The only suggestions I can think of: I would like to see this game if the bar was raised a bit on the rhythm (more object moving - not necessarily harmful to the main character - but background objects (like plankton or, for instance, the gears in the background of lvl 3).

Very nice way to spend my time, either way.

Amazing game without the glitches

This game is great...only the glitches really hold it back. One time I skipped forward a level after dieing, another time, after choosing the suicide option (right click and select it from the menu) I was sent all the way back to level 3ish. Once the author fixes the glitches, this game will be great. Right now though, it's a tease! Please fix!

Wow

Amazing. I think I might have found 1 bug though. I beat the game, then restarted to try and snag a few trophies. When I restarted, there was no ground and Mr. Fancy Pants Man fell to his death until I got a game over. I love this game.

Your description sold it

I found that the song really got amplified through your description of it (the poem). I felt that poem so much, especially with the title, that it's on my away message right now with a link to this site. Amazing work. I'm saving this.

A spell.

This song is really eerie, I gotta tell you. For one reason or another, this flash called Rusting Dreamscape (not sure if it's gonna be saved or blammed yet) really influenced my vote, and just like that, you've got a 5. This song really has the potential to trance someone, really. Good job.

amazing

I havn't heard that song since my dad played it for me when I was a kid. You really brought back some memories, and I like how you mixed things up. Great job.

The simple art style does this peace well, especially because of how the message changes over the course of the submission. I really thought that you were going for lovey-dubey.
Even if you don't agree with the message of the piece, it definitely has a lot of comical AND sad emotion in it, which is a good job on the artist's part. The story is interesting. The punch line was so sad that I had to laugh, seeing it coupled with your art style.

A unique look!

I really do enjoy your unique art style. The way the teeth and gum line are drawn. The cheeks. The eyes. I haven't really seen anything like it before (and I instantly remember the game that your art was featured in on NG). It's definitely odd, compared to what I'm used to seeing, but this is a good thing - it sticks out.

Keep up the good work.

:-D

Very clever concept! I enjoy the smooth lines around the core of the face and along the arms. The image conveys a funny sense of motion (I can picture the muppet flopping around).
The ONLY criticism that I have for you (and it isn't much of a criticism) is that when I looked at the image quickly, it looked as if the muppet had 4 arms, as opposed to 2 waving around. Maybe blurring/blending more than just the shoulder area would convey the movement in the picture a bit better. Either way, once my mind figured it out, it made perfect sense what you were going for.
I wouldn't mind making this my temporary PC background for a while(grabbing and slapping all of my icons around) - very nice! Fun to look at!